(pauses for a few seconds) "Do you guys notlove me anymore? Lincoln: I'd like to keep this in private, but i got a question for you angus. (They smile, Rita comes over to hug him and rest of them except Lynnjoin in for a group hug. His choreography is so dated. I only own this fanfiction story, which is rated K+, so enjoy. Rita Her Rights alt ending11. Lori: No, this is literally a terrible beach trip and I want to go home! ", Lincoln: (to Leni) "Leni, all those times I went to the Mall with you to pick out clothes, anything bad happen those times? loud house no such luck alternate ending fanfiction The students of Royal Woods elementary were anxiously awaiting in line to get their yearbooks. (Shouts) Put the head back on before we get stung by a jellyfish! Lincoln: I dont think I told you I was bad luck. "And we're glad they did," Lisa added, "Because thanks to the man that stopped by as well as a woman at the front desk, we were able to learn that you and dad apparently couldn't keep your own promise." "Do you have any idea how guilty you made us feel for possibly ruining your vacation for acting like ourselves?" Fade to the sisters all waking up from their nightmares. Lori said. Luna: I can't believe we made him feel as if we can't feel anymore or that we don't love and care for him. I loved it. Lynn: (sighs) Who am I kidding? Honestly, while Rita still a little sad that her dear aunt disowned her and her family, she thought it was for the best, if Ruth felt it was right to call her children monsters then that wasn't someone she wanted her family to be around. And Lily was doing, whatever 15 month old babies do when nobody's really watching them (another author interruption: I know this sounds vague and it sounds like Lily is going to hurt herself but she's not. "Uh, sweetie," her dad said, in a nervous tone, "Think you and Luna can get out of the front seats, so I can drive us home." ", Lincoln:[to the viewers] "Maybe I can move into Lisa's fallout shelter. That question caused all the sisters to become shocked and then become angry. Do I mean nothing to you? Lincoln: You are a stupid bully, a coward, a nobody, a freak, a lamebrain, a beast and the worst sister ever AND THAT'S THAT!!!! Morag: is it now? [Later, Lincoln and his family were sitting in the living room when the doorbell rang. Share your thoughts, experiences, and stories behind the art. She told the kids that their parents caused them to get kicked out, she told them what they did and, in a sense, she was responsible for the kids' destructive rampage. NOBODY!!! ", Lincoln: (To his all sisters) "All thoseevents I attended, was I bad luck? Youre our brother! Lincoln: Im sorry this happened. Lincoln: I've had enough of this stupid costume! Lincoln: (tearful) No! Post an update . "They have a point there honey," Lynn Sr. said, before immediately clasping his mouth shut, his wife glaring at him for saying that. "And," Lori said, as she approached her parents, "if you want to act like irresponsible teenagers. The squirrel mascot is dancing a little less energetic than usual. Upload your creations for people to see, favourite, and share. I'm calling the cops! I wont spend the whole afternoon working up an over sweat in that stupid costume that reeks and doesnt fit me! ", [Margo takes a swing and flings herself into the umpire and the bat hits her helmet. First, if they are to go on vacation by themselves, they let the kids stay at home, second, they agree to bring swimwear and wear when going for a late night swim, three, if the place they stay at is great then they go there for a family vacation in the future and four, no more visits to Aunt Ruth's. Lynn Sr. also tried to say something, but he couldn't either. Guess they forgot to lock the windows. But seriously, we made a mess of everything! You locked me out of my room, sold all my furniture and made me into a thing!! ), Lynn: (Screams in despair) ROASTED, BEATEN, VERBALLY THRASHED AND TOSSED INTO THE SEA BY MY ONLY BROTHER!!!! Learn more. Eventually, one of them said, "Look officer. And I HATE LEECHES!" I hate that you put your own lame pride and wants above everything else! Now we've broken the shower." The important thing is that we learn from them. If you didn't show up, I don't want to think about what would've happened." Now watch as i do what I should have done in the first place! YOU'LL BE HAPPY TO KNOW YOU WON'T HAVE TO WORRY ABOUT DEALING WITH ME OR MY CATS OR MY DISGUSTING PUDDING OR MY BUNIONS ANYMORE! [Later, Lincolns room is unlocked and his furnature was back. Lana: (tearful) He might tell everyone in town and everyone will hate us. The sound of typing on a computer was heard for a few minutes. "YOU HEARD HER!" No one said anything, not the siblings, not the obnoxious guys, not Felix, not the woman on the other end, just silence. Please leave non-hurtful comments down below, otherwise you will be blocked. Turning to the siblings, he asked, "When are supposed to leave?" He turned to specifically glare at the parents and added, "And just so you know, you're banned for life now. Rita got up from her seat and said, "Kids, let me explain" "Explain what?!" This confused everyone even more, until Lincoln started putting 2 and 2 together. They were thinking that they should've told their kids no and that they were going to stay at Aunt Ruth's for the weekend. Lynn Sr.: Son..we didn't mean to..we just.we were wrong to-. Luna turned to him with a glare on her face and said, "Forget it, dad! I HATE THIS!!! Also, any negative comments or comments suggesting that I'm trying to paint the siblings in a bad light will be deleted and I will block you. We're already hanging on a thread as it is! Lincoln yelled, "WE HATE YOU!" It's my first ever one shot I've done. Said baby had an angry face and she glared at her mom and dad, "Poo poo!" No such luck alt ending5. Luan: (with a broken voice) "We treated you like an outcast because we were stupid enough to believe that junk! Lynn added. The siblings and parents saw Leni standing there, mom and dad were curious why Leni wasn't with them in the room but before they could say anything, Lisa answered her, "Yes my second oldest sibling. "Yeah, we literally got kicked out of the room," Lori started with, also angry, "BECAUSE OF YOU!!!" Upload stories, poems, character descriptions & more. They go flying, screaming in terror and splash into the seawater.). Making Lincoln think we don't care about him? (The family screams in horror. The Loud House Encyclopedia is a FANDOM TV Community. Upload stories, poems, character descriptions & more. (Lincoln throws Lynn into the rest of the family, with a massive, bowling-sounding crash. Find out what other deviants think - about anything at all. The Loud House No Such Luck Altern. Dont rage out at us. by Jeffrey Gaskill 191 2 1 Lincoln was outside the backporch but he went through that window like it was unlocked and his so-called family return home from the baseball game and then they went ins. ), Lincoln: "What am I doing here? I feel like a fool! Lincoln: NOOOOOOOOOOO!!! Post a journal. I wonder if the windows are locked?" Lynn: Stop being such a baby and just put that suit back on! Ive come to many grave-digging events and cemeteries with you! Rita: Honey! Lana: What did you expect us to do Lincoln? We are no longer grounded to the room. Ronnie Anne: [Sighs] The softball game she accused Lincoln of being bad lack was on Friday the 13th. The entire lobby was destroyed, couches were stomped beyond recognition, lamps and desks were thrown and broken, hotel luggage carts were somehow damaged beyond repair and some people were hurt (another author interruption sorry: not severely, mind you, but enough that they were going to feel pain tomorrow and the next few days). MLP - Twilight Sparkle, Applejack and Pinkie. Felix asked, "Can you tell me what exactly caused these kids to be kicked out?" Well just grin and bear it. Ive put up with your insults, your immaturity, your punches, your violence, your madness, your lack of manners, your stubbornness and your attitude and after today, ive well and truly had it! Didn't you say you would never kick us out? ", Lincoln: "No, Lucy. "And don't even get us started on the chores she makes us do," Lincoln shouted, "Especially buffing her bunions." Rusty has his own ritual before he plays with us. I'll just play softball all by myself! Now, let me make this clear! The Louds. "We just wanna tell you how much we HATE YOU, YOU GROSS UGLY THING!" Lola: We are your family, we do want you, we promise! YOU'RE THE WORST FAMILY TO EVER LIVE!!!! Suite and Sour / Back in Black. But right now, no! "Good," Jeffrey said, stepping aside and point to the doorway, "Now get out! If he losses, he doesn't blame me or my other friends. OUR PRECIOUS TROPHIES! We should thought about it ourselves before jumping to a preposterous conclusion that you were bad luck. Lincoln was put into a coma during the nsl incident where he meets kamen rider diend and is given his powers afterwards he takes Lily and runs away to canterlot where he. She turned to face her parents, a massive glare on her face, and Lola added, "And it's all mom and dad's fault." Whenever the kids fought, they were scared, whenever the kids were angry at each other or one specific sibling, they were scared, but when all the kids were angry at something (in this case, them), they were terrified, because they knew something bad was going to happen. Can you check on the computer and see who's staying in this room." Find out what other deviants think - about anything at all. Rita: I guess this is what we get for selling all his stuff. Share your thoughts, experiences, and stories behind the art. "She's got a million cats that enjoy scratching us like crazy," Lucy said. We don't need to get violent here. "Gross and immature, if you ask me," Lola said, also glaring at her parents. One of his friends added, "We're not messing with you. "AND ONCE AGAIN, I HATE YOU TOO! After a few seconds, the same pounding noise was heard yet again, this time even louder. "Aunt Ruth," Rita said, trying to stop the kids from doing something they'd regret, "hang up the phone." Completed "Well mom, you know what I think?" Luna, Luan, Lola and Lisa were just about ready to ram these three rude jerks with the couch in the room. They were both very nervous and very terrified of their kids right now. Rita: You're all just angry with each other, when we get home, we'll talk about this properly. I hate it that you don't have any feelings or care anymore! Lynn Loud Sr. and Rita Loud were in the spa, trying to get their minds off the trouble their kids caused yesterday. Immediately, all the kids started shouting at the parents and, as they did so, the other guests and employees in the spa took this opportunity to escape, they didn't want to stay and watch mayhem unfold. She then turned around, along with the other siblings, and glared at their parents. I can't let those crazy beasts see me! What do you think, Pep? Lynn and Lana were accidentally destroying the hotel shower. SO I DEMAND AN EXPLANATION!" No self-insert oc this time. This triggered events that none of the Loud House family could have seen. They started running towards them as fast as possible, when suddenly, the sound of a fist pounding against the door is heard. I hate golf! I don't even care about that anymore. Lucy: Gasp! Lock 'n' Loud / The Whole Picture. (Groans) I'll never live this down.(covers her face). She whistles for Fangs. WE WENT TOO FAR!!! Leni: *Gasp* My Sewing Machine! He helped hold us all together and outings just won't be the same without Lincoln. Luna put. I hate that you don't care about anyone, but yourselves! But right now, ive had it! ", Lincoln: "I know how much you guys like having me there for you, and I didn't want to upset or disappoint you. I don't expect it to be good, I just felt like doing an alternative ending. Lincoln: Lana. Although it does teach us a good moral about it not being an easy road (but its worth it), some of the stuff involved does feel a bit out of place (like the disowning part by Ruth). The Loud House Re-Write - Linc or Swim. Everyone turned to the doorway and saw the Loud kids standing there, red with rage and ready to destroy. Lead walls will keep my bad luck from affecting anyone. Lynn Sr. asked. Once they fell asleep, they no longer had any bad dreams that night. During the drive, there was nothing but silence, which is very uncommon for a vehicle that is usually occupied by 13 people. Lincoln: Alright, i admit! Unfortunately, the reason behind the ground shaking presented itself. He crawls over to the kitchen sink and drinks deeply.). We know we don't deserve it, but we hope you can forgive us! Luan brought it. Share your thoughts, experiences, and stories behind the art. "Not until tomorrow," Lincoln replied, confused as to why he was asking this. Head Poet's Anxiety alt scene12. And if you do, I'll have you arrested! MY TROPHIES!!! ", Lynn: "After how badly I treated you? He quickly throws the squirrel suit into a rubbish bin.). As Maddie looked at the devastation, she thought back to the parents. See if I care! Loud House Alternate Ending: Out of the Picture by . ", Rita: "I think we heard enough. "You guys are literally going up the room right now and getting our stuff now!" Cuts back to now. Start talking. He had a glare on his face and he was tapping his foot on the ground repetitively, showing that he was serious. "They're not the only guilty ones," Lynn, the girl in red with brown hair tied in a ponytail, responded back with, in a bit of wise-cracking tone, "Yesterday, Lana and I broke the elevators. And then blew more raspberries and spit on them some more (hopefully the last author interruption but if not then I'll let you know: I know her seat is located in the first row behind the driver in canon but for this instance of going along with not wanting to look at their parents, the siblings put Lily's seat in the far back to help the other siblings not have to look at their parents, I know this is a little wrong, but please understand it shows how mad the siblings are). ", Lincoln: "Thanks. Lynn: NO! This Fanfic is a MASSIVE critique on every fanfic that is targeting the Episode "No Such Luck" of the Western Animation Series "The Loud House." Also it is part Satire, so most of the behavior of the Characters appearing here may not be their usual self's. If you like all the Revenge-Fics who like to torment Lincoln's family and/or present his . You're all just pure wastes of life! Lincoln: You know what!? Eventually Lincoln had the courage to say something, but was stuttering as he did so, "Areare you saying" he wanted to finished that sentence but felt that he couldn't. Everyone in the room went silent, stood still, afraid to make a move or a noise. ", Leni: (with a sad look on her face) "No. They were my favourite! When the officer entered the room, he was shocked at what he saw. Sweaty Pants here! Summary: Taken from the episode 'No Such Luck'. [shows the score: Hazeltuck Lions: 3, Royal Woods Squirrels: nothing.] *Sniff* I thought he liked our things! I'll keep it between the both of us. You can't ground us, we're the parents!" "I can't even find anything funny to say because I'm that mad with both of you," Luan said, her parents becoming uncomfortable with the glare on the young comedian's face. ", Lynn: Oh Lincoln. (The other sisters come over onto the main couch. I have truly failed the term 'scientist'. I certainly am not! The kids, of course, still had some demands to give their parents.